South Dakota ELA 11-12.W.3.d
The Standard
- 11-12.W.3
- Write narratives or other creative texts (e.g., poetry, digital composition, graphic stories, memoirs) to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique and established voice, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences.
Use strong, effective word choice and figurative language.
South Dakota English Language Arts Standards (2025)
Teacher's field guide
What This Standard Means
What Students Need to Do
- Students choose words that give readers a clear picture and fit the tone of their writing. They use comparisons or other figurative language when it helps readers understand an idea or feeling.
What Mastery Looks Like
- A student replaces vague words with precise ones without making every sentence longer. They can explain why a comparison fits the scene and cut it when it distracts.
Common Misconceptions
- Students may think a longer word is always a stronger word. They may add a simile to every paragraph, even when it sounds forced or changes the tone.
How to Assess It
- Give students this sentence: “The crowd was loud, and the game was exciting.” Ask them to revise it with two precise word choices and one fitting comparison, then explain the effect they wanted.
Lesson moves
Ways to Teach It
Give pairs a bland paragraph and verb and image cards; have them replace two vague words and add one comparison that fits its mood.
Ask, “Does calling the cafeteria a battlefield clarify a lunch scene or exaggerate it?” Have students explain their answer in two sentences.
Run a revision relay: teams replace “went,” “nice,” and “bad” in three sample sentences, then defend which choices fit the tone.
Have students write a two-sentence concert review for the school paper, using a precise verb and one fitting comparison to describe the music.
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- 7.W.3.d
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- 9-10.W.3.d
Use strong, effective word choice and figurative language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters.
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