CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.9-10.3d
The Standard
Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts
Teacher's field guide
What This Standard Means
What Students Need to Do
- Students choose exact nouns, strong verbs, and concrete details that help readers picture a scene. They use sensory information selectively to reveal setting, action, or character.
What Mastery Looks Like
- A student can replace vague wording with details that create a clear image and mood. Each detail fits the narrator, advances the scene, and avoids clutter.
Common Misconceptions
- Students often pile on adjectives instead of choosing a specific noun or verb. They may list all five senses mechanically, confuse detail with length, or name an emotion rather than showing its physical signs.
How to Assess It
- Exit ticket: Rewrite “Jordan entered the creepy room” in two sentences using one exact verb and two sensory details, without using “creepy” or naming an emotion.
Lesson moves
Ways to Teach It
Give students a mystery object in a bag; they touch it, write five exact details, and trade descriptions for identification.
Compare two versions of a doorway scene, then write which three word choices make one version clearer and explain why.
Run a vague-word relay where teams replace words like went, nice, and bad with scene-specific nouns and verbs.
Examine a restaurant review or police report, then revise one bland passage so readers can picture the place or event.
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- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.7.3d
Use precise words and phrases, relevant descriptive details, and sensory language to capture the action and convey experiences and events.
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.6.3d
Use precise words and phrases, relevant descriptive details, and sensory language to convey experiences and events.
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