CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.11-12.3d
The Standard
Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts
What This Standard Means
Students need to choose language that makes a narrative feel specific, not generic. They should use exact nouns and verbs, sensory details, and small revealing facts to help readers picture a person, place, event, or experience clearly.
Mastery looks like writing where readers can see, hear, and feel what is happening without being overloaded. Students often get stuck using vague words, stacking adjectives, or adding random description that does not reveal character, mood, or meaning.
Ways to Teach It
- Bring in a photo of a messy room, and have students write five precise details that reveal who lives there.
- Prompt students to revise “She was nervous” using only actions, objects, sounds, and physical sensations.
- Give students three bland sentences and ask them to replace vague words with exact nouns, verbs, and sensory details.
- Have students describe a familiar school hallway so an absent student could identify it from the writing alone.
Before This Standard
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Use precise words and phrases, relevant descriptive details, and sensory language to capture the action and convey experiences and events.
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.6.3d
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- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.8.3d
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