CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.11-12.3d
The Standard
Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts
Teacher's field guide
What This Standard Means
What Students Need to Do
- Students choose exact nouns, strong verbs, revealing details, and sensory words to make narrative scenes clear. They select details that show setting, action, character, and mood rather than listing everything.
What Mastery Looks Like
- A student can revise a vague scene so readers can picture where people are, what they do, and how the moment feels. Each detail supports the setting, action, character, or mood.
Common Misconceptions
- Students may pile on adjectives instead of choosing exact nouns and strong verbs. They may name emotions, such as “she was scared,” without showing physical reactions or actions. They may add sensory details that sound vivid but do not fit the scene.
How to Assess It
- Ask students to rewrite, “The cafeteria was crowded and noisy.” Require one precise verb, two telling details, and language that appeals to two senses.
Lesson moves
Ways to Teach It
Place an object in a paper bag; students touch it without looking, list precise sensory details, then write a four-sentence reveal.
Display two versions of a setting description; students identify the clearer wording and explain which details create the stronger image.
Run a vague-word relay where teams replace words like nice, went, and thing with precise choices that fit a given scene.
Study a restaurant review, then have students describe a familiar meal using exact details from sight, smell, taste, sound, and texture.
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