CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.8.5
The Standard
With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on how well purpose and audience have been addressed.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts · Writing Standards
Teacher's field guide
What This Standard Means
What Students Need to Do
- Students plan, revise, edit, or rewrite a draft based on its purpose and intended audience. They use feedback from peers or adults, then decide which changes improve meaning, structure, tone, and correctness.
What Mastery Looks Like
- Students can explain why a draft needs changes, then revise ideas, organization, tone, or details to fit the audience and purpose. They can also edit grade-level conventions and use feedback selectively.
Common Misconceptions
- Students often treat revision as fixing spelling and punctuation only. They may accept every peer suggestion, make random changes, or rewrite without checking the purpose and audience.
How to Assess It
- On an exit ticket, give students a short draft and name its audience. Ask them to make one audience-focused revision, one convention edit, and label each change.
Lesson moves
Ways to Teach It
Give pairs a printed draft to cut apart, reorder, and annotate with reasons for moving, adding, or removing sections.
Ask students to write which sentence best serves the intended audience, then defend their choice with evidence from the draft.
Run a revision relay where teams improve one draft for ideas, organization, word choice, and conventions in separate rounds.
Have students rewrite the same school announcement for classmates, families, and the principal, changing tone, details, and word choice for each audience.
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